[It's bad enough that he's threatening Lydia, but the arrogant way in which he puts his fingers on the blade offends Kira so very deeply that her next move is so quick it's like the tension released from a coil.
The blade is twisted; not against his fingers, because maiming someone, even if they're a werewolf who can regenerate, doesn't seem right even while in her deepest anger, but under and past his hand as she pivots on her angle, bringing the katana up and over in a diagonal arc along his shoulder.]
I really suggest you avoid using metaphors involving body parts.
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The blade is twisted; not against his fingers, because maiming someone, even if they're a werewolf who can regenerate, doesn't seem right even while in her deepest anger, but under and past his hand as she pivots on her angle, bringing the katana up and over in a diagonal arc along his shoulder.]
I really suggest you avoid using metaphors involving body parts.